送交者: Editor 于 October 16, 2008 23:05:57:
回答: 【其它】fair play 由 clriufs3 于 October 16, 2008 17:17:17:
讲得挺好, 面具太多是个问题，那啥mm也没有必要离开。 谢谢您的关心，常来玩、多指正！
这个鹰文我给你瞎改改？ 改对了别谢我，改错了咱一起切磋？ 这一把希望大家都能看懂。
原文：
I am an outsider to this forum. this fact has never bothered me. most likely never will. （听得懂，没啥大问题。）
perhaps this particular status as an outsider blinded my ability to detect the subtle connotations and implications between the exchanges. to take each post literally, most comments seem within the bounds of propriety (with notable exceptions removed by 一默 reasonably promptly). (1. 动词“blind” 动宾习惯搭配错误; 2. 非逻辑运用的不定式短语 “to take…” ; 3. “connotations and implications” of what? 两个逻辑上未完整的名词.。 4.“exceptions” of what? 含混。)
with free pseudonym registration and a rather neutral 一默, this is an open forum. and it is fair play with the exception of masquerade proliferation, since I am rather poor at retro mapping identifies behind the masquerades when revealed to posts made with masquerades. (1. “since I am…”: 一个违反逻辑的“原因”从句，而且跳出来一个不合乎语法的动词identifies （什么？）2.”… identifies behind ... with masquerades.”: 整个这一小段句法、逻辑乱了套，完全念不下去。)
I don't see the reason to go or stay because the forum or the forum participants
conform or not to what one imagines should be the case. (最后部分有用错的、不理解的词，引起逻辑混乱。)
修改后的：
I am an outsider to this forum. This fact has never bothered me and most likely never will.
Perhaps this particular status as an outsider makes it hard for me to detect the subtle connotations and implications of the language used in some of the exchanges. Taken literally, most comments seem within the bounds of propriety (with notable exceptions of those promptly removed by 一默 ). With free pseudonym registrations and a rather neutral 一默, this is an open forum.
And it is “fair play” with the exception of masquerade proliferation, which might not be fair to me or any others as an outsider since I am rather poor at retro mapping identities of those behind the masquerades. （最后的 “I am…” 还是有逻辑问题，勉强可以。）
I don't see the reason either to leave or stay because there is nothing specifically spelled out which the forum participants are supposed to abide by.
谢谢用两种文字分享！