送交者: NF 于 December 05, 2002 00:57:11:
回答: Grandfather Through Grandmother’s Eyes 由 丹丹 于 December 04, 2002 22:40:04:
人物的描述和对话都处理得很好。男孩子就很难写得出来。
“the scent of garlic that lingered in the air.”
“。。。。promptly stood up, straightened her gray shirt and pants and wobbled out to the balcony; ”
这篇文章一定获奖了吧？
ALEX现在三年级，每星期都要写一篇SUPER STORY。有些也还可以，等有时间找出来也贴上。