送交者: LA 于 December 05, 2002 21:13:46:
回答: Grandfather Through Grandmother’s Eyes 由 丹丹 于 December 04, 2002 22:40:04:
今天午休时点进了你的 “Grandfather through Grandmother's Eyes" . 读后感触多多。难得小小年纪，能在这么小的篇幅里，把个“耿直刚强少文气，忠诚勤奋有丹心”的祖父写得跃然纸上。难得在这不长的文字中，透视出几许生活哲理。
提点建议：The first paragraph could be better if you used long sentences less and replaced by more dialogue or simple sentences.